Room 5 is a Year3/ 4 class of 29 awesome pupils.
This year we will share many of our learning activities on our class blog and we look forward to reading what other classes are doing as well.
Hi Room 5, that was very interesting. I liked the bit about the helicopter because I didn’t know they had a light on the bottom. Now I can understand why it is called the eye in the sky. I also did not know that some german shepherd dogs can run faster than people. My friend has a german shepherd so one day I might have to race it. Thanks for sharing your blog.
Hi, I’m Sam from Kokatahi Kowhitirangi school. I really like your story because it is a very descriptive story. You have used adjectives in a proper way. You used deeper features extremely well. Next time maybe make the sentences have some diffffferent ideas. Like, I mean you put sentences like german sheperds can sniff a human from their scent. German shepherds are very fast. I have a friend who has a pet german shepherd.
Hi my name is Briese. I liked the bit about the moving back bit that spins round and round and round all the time it moves. Thank you for sharing your blog with me thank you.
Hi Room 5. You were very lucky to have an eagle helicopter visit your school. I didn’t know that a German Shepherd can run faster than a person. They must run very fast. I wonder if the dogs do any training? I liked the way you linked your story to your post. Thanks for sharing.
Hi my name is Caleb and I go to Kokatahi school. That chopper looked awesome. You were so lucky to have it land in your school. How big was it when you stood next to it? Was it very noisy when it landed? I was very surprised to learn how much the camera cost and that it was more than the helicopter! Thanks for sharing.
Hi my name is Rowan and i go to Kokatahi School. I really liked how the helicopter landed at your school. We have never had a helicopter land in our school. I knew that the camera on it was very expensive, but it does a good job. I have been in a helicopter before. It was good to be high in the sky and we were spraying. Thanks for sharing.
HI my name is Liam and I go to Kokatahi School. I think you did the eagle has landed really well. You would have learned a lot about the police having the helicopter and the dogs visit you. We have had the police dogs visit our school before and we watcher=d them do some training. It was pretty amazing. Thanks for sharing your blog.
Hi my name is Charlotte. I go to Kokatahi-Kowhitirangi School. I think that would be really cool to have a helicopter at my School. Did you get to go in the helicopter? About the dogs, do you know what the German Shepard's name is? Thanks for sharing your blog.
Hi my name is Imogen and I am from Kokatahi school . I really liked the way the you told the readers about how the dogs work and how they work good for police.I thought that that story was very good at describing what the helicopter looked like.Next time you could try to put some more punctuation in your sentence.
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Hi Room 5, that was very interesting. I liked the bit about the helicopter because I didn’t know they had a light on the bottom. Now I can understand why it is called the eye in the sky. I also did not know that some german shepherd dogs can run faster than people. My friend has a german shepherd so one day I might have to race it. Thanks for sharing your blog.
Hi, I’m Sam from Kokatahi Kowhitirangi school. I really like your story because it is a very descriptive story. You have used adjectives in a proper way. You used deeper features extremely well. Next time maybe make the sentences have some diffffferent ideas. Like, I mean you put sentences like german sheperds can sniff a human from their scent. German shepherds are very fast. I have a friend who has a pet german shepherd.
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Hello my name is Dominic this was really good.
Hi my name is Briese. I liked the bit about the moving back bit that spins round and round and round all the time it moves. Thank you for sharing your blog with me thank you.
Hi Room 5. You were very lucky to have an eagle helicopter visit your school. I didn’t know that a German Shepherd can run faster than a person. They must run very fast. I wonder if the dogs do any training? I liked the way you linked your story to your post. Thanks for sharing.
Hi my name is Caleb and I go to Kokatahi school. That chopper looked awesome. You were so lucky to have it land in your school. How big was it when you stood next to it? Was it very noisy when it landed? I was very surprised to learn how much the camera cost and that it was more than the helicopter! Thanks for sharing.
Hi my name is Rowan and i go to Kokatahi School. I really liked how the helicopter landed at your school. We have never had a helicopter land in our school. I knew that the camera on it was very expensive, but it does a good job. I have been in a helicopter before. It was good to be high in the sky and we were spraying. Thanks for sharing.
HI my name is Liam and I go to Kokatahi School. I think you did the eagle has landed really well. You would have learned a lot about the police having the helicopter and the dogs visit you. We have had the police dogs visit our school before and we watcher=d them do some training. It was pretty amazing. Thanks for sharing your blog.
Hi my name is Charlotte. I go to Kokatahi-Kowhitirangi School. I think that would be really cool to have a helicopter at my School. Did you get to go in the helicopter? About the dogs, do you know what the German Shepard's name is? Thanks for sharing your blog.
Hi my name is Imogen and I am from Kokatahi school . I really liked the way the you told the readers about how the dogs work and how they work good for police.I thought that that story was very good at describing what the helicopter looked like.Next time you could try to put some more punctuation in your sentence.
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