The Old Haunted House
I found an old spooky house. I took a big step into it. There was a zombie on the ceiling .It disappeared as soon as I saw it.I did not know where it went. I went up the crackly stairs. There was a scary hungry Were-wolf sitting on a broken bed . It howled so loudly it poped my ears and smashed the windows. There was an invisible ghost and I could feel its presence. The ghost said boo. Then I ran down the wooden stairs but when I got down the door would not open and the stairs were broken. The house sucked me into new dimension. The old house I was sucked into was colourful and when I went inside it was my grandmother's house. She baked me some cookies and those monsters were just halloween decorations
3 comments:
Hi Shannon it me jasmine i like your sotry
Hey room 8
I really like your work he Haunted house story its a really cool one just keep up the good work
By Jessie
Hi room 8,
I like your story about the haunted house which was actually your grandmothers house. I think their should be a little bit more information. Keep up the good learning.
From Yvette
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