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Tuesday, April 16, 2013


One day our class wanted a fish as our class pet . We went to the Fish Shop to buy the fishing gear . Then we went to the Tamiki river to catch our fish . we waited patiently and my rod began to shake. My whole body shook because I caught a taniwha  . It could talk . It said "Can I be your pet in class ? "I said , " yes ! " We went back to class and put it in a large tank . It would make monkey noises and it distracted us when we did our work . After a few days we put it back in the Tamiki river and we got a starfish instead . It was a better pet to have . It wouldn't distract us and so we were all happy with our new pet .

11 comments:

Ms. Kirkpatrick said...

Great story! I like that your setting is so close to school.

Fine said...

Hi room 8,
That was such a great story. Keep up the great stories room 8.

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Fine

June said...

Hi Room8 what a great story! I like how it was setting and it was close to the school and keep the work up Room 8




By June

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Hi room 8

keep up the great work.that was a great story.



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