Jackie Chan and the Giant Eagle
A long time ago in ancient China there lived a cruel,evil Ninja master with a slave named Jackie Chan.
Jackie Chan did not like training to be the best Ninja ever.He wanted to be free like the wind and also challenge the best Sumo Slammer in Greece but he wasn't allowed to go.So he ran away and cried.Soon he heard footsteps like thunder,it was a Giant Eagle!He jumped on it and they flew to Greece.
They landed outside the stadium and Jackie ran just in time for the javelin throw "75 metres wow!"he exclaimed.Then it was Discus a boy in his teens threw '170 metres"a man said.Jackie felt nervous but he threw the disc anyway."190 metres"the same man said aloud.Jackie couldn't believe his luck he had won 10,000 dollars.
So he went home,made his master the slave and never worked hard again.
They landed outside the stadium and Jackie ran just in time for the javelin throw "75 metres wow!"he exclaimed.Then it was Discus a boy in his teens threw '170 metres"a man said.Jackie felt nervous but he threw the disc anyway."190 metres"the same man said aloud.Jackie couldn't believe his luck he had won 10,000 dollars.
So he went home,made his master the slave and never worked hard again.
1 comment:
I liked your describing words.There is lots of action in your story.
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